Comments on: silence & i http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence/ Wed, 08 Feb 2012 13:28:25 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Nolawi http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence/comment-page-1/#comment-1165 Nolawi Sun, 11 Mar 2007 15:50:33 +0000 http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence-and-i/#comment-1165 this is very good meron, keep writing... this is very good meron, keep writing…

]]> By: Doro Mata http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence/comment-page-1/#comment-1164 Doro Mata Sat, 10 Mar 2007 19:50:10 +0000 http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence-and-i/#comment-1164 beautiful! beautiful!

]]> By: pazion http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence/comment-page-1/#comment-1163 pazion Fri, 09 Mar 2007 16:52:29 +0000 http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence-and-i/#comment-1163 Merons <blockquote>i can hear the cry of the leaf on a tree as it falls to the ground i can hear the call of an echoing voice and there's no one around</blockquote> that ... that was absolutely a great metaphor... I can visualize what you say... Love it.! Merons

i can hear the cry
of the leaf on a tree
as it falls to the ground
i can hear the call
of an echoing voice
and there’s no one around

that … that was absolutely a great metaphor… I can visualize what you say…

Love it.!

]]> By: bgFelasfit http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence/comment-page-1/#comment-1162 bgFelasfit Thu, 08 Mar 2007 20:18:58 +0000 http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence-and-i/#comment-1162 Meron ...I LIKE! Great poem... my favorite section being: <em> while the children laughed i was always afraid of the smile of the clown so i close my eyes till i cant see the light and i hide from the sould </em> I liked how you played with 2 different senses (at least in my mind's interpretation...): the sound of laughter...stimulated ur fear of the 'painted clown smile'- that amuses but is manufactured/mask-like...and so you chose blindness...which moved toward permanence. Hiding you from <b>selling</b> your soul...? :) at least that's how i read it... it's curious how the innocence of children's laughter can stimulate the visual of a clown's smile...in the negative light-the words: hide, afraid, close, can't, sould Meron …I LIKE! Great poem…
my favorite section being:

while the children laughed
i was always afraid
of the smile of the clown
so i close my eyes
till i cant see the light
and i hide from the sould

I liked how you played with 2 different senses (at least in my mind’s interpretation…): the sound of laughter…stimulated ur fear of the ‘painted clown smile’- that amuses but is manufactured/mask-like…and so you chose blindness…which moved toward permanence. Hiding you from selling your soul…?
:) at least that’s how i read it… it’s curious how the innocence of children’s laughter can stimulate the visual of a clown’s smile…in the negative light-the words: hide, afraid, close, can’t, sould

]]> By: MindWithOutConscious http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence/comment-page-1/#comment-1161 MindWithOutConscious Thu, 08 Mar 2007 19:41:23 +0000 http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence-and-i/#comment-1161 [quote comment="22831"]MindWithOutConscious, Just wanna say, I really enjoy reading your comments. Happy friendship week to you too![/quote] Thanks Celebratelife, i feel the same! [quote comment="22831"]MindWithOutConscious, Just wanna say, I really enjoy reading your comments. Happy friendship week to you too![/quote]

Thanks Celebratelife, i feel the same!

]]> By: celebratelife http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence/comment-page-1/#comment-1160 celebratelife Thu, 08 Mar 2007 16:53:52 +0000 http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence-and-i/#comment-1160 MindWithOutConscious, Just wanna say, I really enjoy reading your comments. Happy friendship week to you too! MindWithOutConscious, Just wanna say, I really enjoy reading your comments. Happy friendship week to you too!

]]> By: MindWithOutConscious http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence/comment-page-1/#comment-1159 MindWithOutConscious Thu, 08 Mar 2007 16:51:21 +0000 http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence-and-i/#comment-1159 Beautiful GiTem! to add a spice to it :-) A colleague just reminded me that it is a friendship week. Eventhough, I dont know any of you in person, your civility & sophistication in this forum impressed me :-) so consider this as if it was sent from someone you know & care ... Happy Friendship week to yaa all !!! ...... A Friend...... (A)ccepts you as you are (B)elieves in "you" (C)alls you just to say "HI" (D)oesn't give up ! ! on you !!! (E)nvisions the whole of you (even the unfinished parts) (F)orgives your mistakes (G)ives unconditionally (H)elps you (I)nvites you over !!! (J)ust "be" with you (K)eeps you close at heart (L)oves you for who you are (M)akes a difference in your life !!! (N)ever Judges (O)ffer support (P)icks you up (Q)uiets your fears (R)aises your spirits !!! (S)ays nice things about you (T)ells U the truth when you need to hear it (U)nderstands you (V)alues you !!! (W)alks beside you (X)-plains thing you don't understand (Y)ells when you won't listen and (Z)aps you back to reality -Have a mellow day! Beautiful GiTem!

to add a spice to it :-)

A colleague just reminded me that it is a friendship week. Eventhough, I dont know any of you in person, your civility & sophistication in this forum impressed me :-) so consider this as if it was sent from someone you know & care … Happy Friendship week to yaa all !!!

…… A Friend……

(A)ccepts you as you are
(B)elieves in “you”
(C)alls you just to say “HI”
(D)oesn’t give up ! ! on you
!!!

(E)nvisions the whole of you (even the unfinished parts)
(F)orgives your mistakes
(G)ives unconditionally
(H)elps you
(I)nvites you over
!!!

(J)ust “be” with you
(K)eeps you close at heart
(L)oves you for who you are
(M)akes a difference in your life
!!!

(N)ever Judges
(O)ffer support
(P)icks you up
(Q)uiets your fears
(R)aises your spirits
!!!

(S)ays nice things about you
(T)ells U the truth when you need to hear it
(U)nderstands you
(V)alues you
!!!

(W)alks beside you
(X)-plains thing you don’t understand
(Y)ells when you won’t listen and
(Z)aps you back to reality

-Have a mellow day!

]]> By: curious http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence/comment-page-1/#comment-1158 curious Thu, 08 Mar 2007 14:38:20 +0000 http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence-and-i/#comment-1158 Finally a poem I can understand, good job Meron!! Finally a poem I can understand, good job Meron!!

]]> By: maebel http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence/comment-page-1/#comment-1157 maebel Thu, 08 Mar 2007 13:49:28 +0000 http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence-and-i/#comment-1157 I feel you meron. I really do. Good work! I feel you meron. I really do.
Good work!

]]> By: celebratelife http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence/comment-page-1/#comment-1156 celebratelife Thu, 08 Mar 2007 13:47:15 +0000 http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence-and-i/#comment-1156 Is this one of those "if these walls could talk" poems? That's how I'm interpreting it. It's all that you've seen, heard, experienced in life and how you're unable to share your emotions. Is this one of those “if these walls could talk” poems? That’s how I’m interpreting it. It’s all that you’ve seen, heard, experienced in life and how you’re unable to share your emotions.

]]> By: zoro http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence/comment-page-1/#comment-1155 zoro Thu, 08 Mar 2007 05:08:15 +0000 http://www.bernos.com/blog/2007/03/08/silence-and-i/#comment-1155 i can tell this came from inside..soulful..i can relate as i often just reflect myself. i can tell this came from inside..soulful..i can relate as i often just reflect myself.

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